Spottedleaf's First Death

This is a complete fail! I might delete this.... It's just so bad! I made 2 others before this trying to make it good, but they were even worse. I really really failed...
anyway

This is Spottedleaf's first death. She was trying to get the kits that Clawface (ShadowClan cat) was stealing, but he killed her.

Should I keep or delete this? I really want to not upload this, but I just want to see how you people react. If no one favs this by tomorrow, it's a definite delete, cause that would mean people AGREE WITH ME FINALLY